Narrative Writing
WALT add details and interesting vocabulary to support our ideas.
WALT write a narrative.
WALT use directional language in our writing.
What can be seen?
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I can seen a Pig on a surfboard
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What can be heard?
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I can heard The Waves
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What can be smelt?
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I can smelt The wind
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What can be felt?
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The Water
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Who are the characters in your story?
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A pig and a man
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Where is your story set?
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At a Beach
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What problem is going to happen in your story?
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The pig Riding a surfboard
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How are you going to solve the problem?
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I don't know
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You are going to write below.
Think about how you can:
- Add detail to your ideas using interesting vocabulary.
- Use directional language (in front of, behind, to the left of…) to
- make connections between your ideas.
Write here:
One day a man and Has pig went to a beach to surf on a surfboard
the Colour of the pig is Black but i not know What the colour of the
man When the pig and the man went on the surfboard the pig was not
that Scared but Some pig are Scared of surfing and the pig can Swim
so it Mass be a Brave Pig but if there is More waves the pig Well Swim
but if the waves was so big the pig will Stay on the surfboard but
When the surfboard Tips over the pig will Try to Climb Back onto the
surfboard our Swim back to the Send but and the pig will Just Stay in
the water and Wait Until the surfboard will Come but if the surfboard
Did not come by the Jack the pig will Just Stay in the Water but if the
man is on the surfboard he will get Jack the pig and pot him on the
surfboard so Alex,and,Jack went surfing on the big waves but they was
one want was so big that it Push Jack and Alex to the show but it was
so hard to get back out where the big waves were so Alex and Jack had
some lunch before they went back out to the ocean for some waves
want were some big when Alex and Jack went back out to the ocean and
when Alex and jack the pig were going out a bid as wave come rushing
towards them when they hit the show Jack the pig went flying towards
the sun
was a little bit funny so Jack was just walking towards the surfboard so they can go and have one more before they went back home but when it was the last Wave it was so big that it was going to hit Alex because Alex was at the back of the surfboard but lucky the wave did not hit Alex and the wave hit the tip of the board and it raced as back to show and at was the end of Jack and Alex but when alex and jack went back home they had a rest before they went to sleep the end.
the Colour of the pig is Black but i not know What the colour of the
man When the pig and the man went on the surfboard the pig was not
that Scared but Some pig are Scared of surfing and the pig can Swim
so it Mass be a Brave Pig but if there is More waves the pig Well Swim
but if the waves was so big the pig will Stay on the surfboard but
When the surfboard Tips over the pig will Try to Climb Back onto the
surfboard our Swim back to the Send but and the pig will Just Stay in
the water and Wait Until the surfboard will Come but if the surfboard
Did not come by the Jack the pig will Just Stay in the Water but if the
man is on the surfboard he will get Jack the pig and pot him on the
surfboard so Alex,and,Jack went surfing on the big waves but they was
one want was so big that it Push Jack and Alex to the show but it was
so hard to get back out where the big waves were so Alex and Jack had
some lunch before they went back out to the ocean for some waves
want were some big when Alex and Jack went back out to the ocean and
when Alex and jack the pig were going out a bid as wave come rushing
towards them when they hit the show Jack the pig went flying towards
the sun
was a little bit funny so Jack was just walking towards the surfboard so they can go and have one more before they went back home but when it was the last Wave it was so big that it was going to hit Alex because Alex was at the back of the surfboard but lucky the wave did not hit Alex and the wave hit the tip of the board and it raced as back to show and at was the end of Jack and Alex but when alex and jack went back home they had a rest before they went to sleep the end.
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